"Safe Practices"

An Exercise

Summary: There are few intellectual offenses more serious than plagiarism in academic and professional contexts. This resource offers advice on how to avoid plagiarism in your work.
Contributors:Karl Stolley, Allen Brizee
Last Edited: 2010-04-21 07:50:43

Read over each of the following passages, and respond on your own or as a class as to whether or not it uses citations accurately. If it doesn't, what would you do to improve the passage so it's properly cited?

1. Last summer, my family and I traveled to Chicago, which was quite different from the rural area I grew up in. We saw the dinosaur Sue at the Field Museum, and ate pizza at Gino's East.
~Answer: There's no need to cite common names of places of people.~

2. Americans want to create a more perfect union; they also want to establish justice, ensure domestic tranquility, provide for the common defense, promote the general welfare, and secure the blessings of liberty for everybody.
~Answer: Certain works in this example were taken fomr the Constitution of the United States and should be recognized as such. For those specific words quotation marks need to be added along with citing the source at the end of the example.~
                         

3. I find it ridiculous that 57% of high school students think their teachers assign too much homework.
~Answer: Since this example is using a stutistic then is needs to be cited at the end.~

Numbers 4, 5, and 6 all refer to the following passage from Martin Luther King's "Letter from the Birmingham Jail":

You deplore the demonstrations taking place in Birmingham. But your statement, I am sorry to say, fails to express a similar concern for the conditions that brought about the demonstrations. I am sure that none of you would want to rest content with the superficial kind of social analysis that deals merely with effects and does not grapple with underlying causes. It is unfortunate that demonstrations are taking place in Birmingham, but it is even more unfortunate that the city's white power structure left the Negro community with no alternative.

4. Martin Luther King was certain that nobody would want to be contented with a surfacy type of social analysis that concerns itself only with effects and doesn't deal with root causes.
~Answer: This seems to be the writeres oppinion but used words from the above piece and will need to be cited for those words. The writere and the writers work will also need to be cites.~

5. Martin Luther King wrote that the city of Birmingham's "white power structure" left African-Americans there "no alternative" but to demonstrate ("Letter from the Birmingham Jail" para. 5).
~Answer: This example seems to be write properly.~

6. In "Letter from the Birmingham Jail," King writes to fellow clergy saying that although they "deplore the demonstrations taking place in Birmingham, your statement fails to express a similar concern for the conditions that brought about the demonstrations."
~Answer: The also seems to be writen in the proper format and the source would need to be cited.~

7. My friend Kara told me that she loves living so close to the ocean.
~Answer: This is common information shared umungest friends and wouldn't need to be cited.~

8. Americans are guaranteed the right to freely gather for peaceful meetings.
~Answer: This is an example of a brawed statment make from a common document and would not need to cited.~

Purdue Online Writing Lab: http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/589/04/